What's In a Kiss

What's In a Kiss

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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Of the times we are confused about out relationships

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Sometimes you’re pulling for me
Sometimes it seems I’m pulling for you
But it seems we’re never pulling for us
Is this love or are we fair-weather
Will we ever put these pieces together
‘Cause I’m confused and I just don’t know


When we kiss I get this feeling inside
Should I run from it, should I hide
Who’ll pull away first seems to be a contest sometimes
Is it just a kiss or is this it


Honey I just don’t know, I’m a bit confused
What exactly do I mean to you
Are we friends waiting to uncover
A feeling between love and lust
‘Cause I don’t know, I’m a little confused


Will we ever get past this
These sweet sangria kisses
To a place that we know for a fact
I love you and you love me back
Or are we just a couple of friendly friends
Will this sweet runaround come to an end
Or are we doomed to be lost in indecision
I just don’t know, what’s in this kiss…

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


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I absolutely love this. Thank you for writing it. :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can tell through your poems that you are a deep thinker and
you put a lot of thought into writing them. Love is so confusing,
full of questions, some never seem to ever get answered. You delved
into those emotions very well. AD

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like where you took this poem. It says a lot about those awkward beginning stages of a relationship. Superb work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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