GIRLS

GIRLS

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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Gotta love the ladies, they entrance us all.

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Easily you are the one
Ruling over my heart like the goddess Aphrodite
In the moments that you’re around
Nerves and confidence go away


Something about you makes me smile
Hearing your voice causes my heart to flutter
And the world to stand still
Nothing could compare to a moment with you
Nice, sweet and charming
Only angels are more divine
Nothing in this world could be more perfect


Just to see the sparkle of your eyes
In the light of the sunniest day
Life feels that much more full
Love feels that much more possible


Knowing you has meant the world to me
Every moment a piece of the divine
Lovely is the way you can make us smile
Lovely is the way you see beyond the outside world
You are a one in a million girl


Girls so wonderful in every place you look
I can’t explain the pull they have on us
Refreshing are the ones pure of heart
Lovely ladies they are
Stars that shine brighter than the sun

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


Author's Note

Blake Q Hatfield
I just kind of wanted to have fun with this one. I used women's name and the word girl (I colored the names hidden in the left colum.) So the letters came and then the poem came to be.

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Lovely light wonderful thoughts.

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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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