The Girl of My Dreams

The Girl of My Dreams

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield

When I think of you
I get that feeling
When I think of you
I want to hit the ceiling
I want run around and leap for joy
I think I'm in love


When I look into your sweet eyes
When I see your wonderful smile
When I see you I feel there's nothing else
The world has stopped and the stars shine in the day
Nothing could be better than to be there with you


And I wonder how you came to be
I wonder about you every day
It's just the way you make me feel
I can feel, I can see the sunshine, even on the darkest days
I could climb heights unfathomed, achieve and conquer
The thought of you brings this ecstasy
I never want this feeling to go away
But I can only dream for a moment


Oh dream girl, oh sweet subconscious memory
Lock inside a mind so longing and lonely
If only I could make you real, beyond this fantasy
I pray that I can find you out there waiting somewhere
Ready to show me those heights of what could be
Oh you wonderful dream girl, won't you show yourself to me
The girl of my dreams, please become more than subconscious memory

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


Author's Note

Blake Q Hatfield
Sometimes the idea of what we long for can be the fuel we need to seek out that which we want. Sometimes those ideas are a hauntingly sad reminder of things we have yet to procure.

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I hope you find this girl that you are looking for Blake!

Oh dream girl, oh sweet subconscious memory
Lock inside a mind so longing and lonely
If only I could make you real, beyond this fantasy
I pray that I can find you out there waiting somewhere
Ready to show me those heights of what could be
Oh you wonderful dream girl, won't you show yourself to me
The girl of my dreams, please become more than subconscious memory

This is definitely heart felt...You sound head over heels in love! Blessings, Carole

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I was so moved by this piece. Whoever you will find in the future sure is a lucky girl. I almst want to volunteer myself to be one of the candidates =D. Huh, just kidding. Anyways, it is a piece of beautiful, and sweet words. I can feel your emotions perfectly.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hope you find this girl that you are looking for Blake!

Oh dream girl, oh sweet subconscious memory
Lock inside a mind so longing and lonely
If only I could make you real, beyond this fantasy
I pray that I can find you out there waiting somewhere
Ready to show me those heights of what could be
Oh you wonderful dream girl, won't you show yourself to me
The girl of my dreams, please become more than subconscious memory

This is definitely heart felt...You sound head over heels in love! Blessings, Carole

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 29, 2008

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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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