The Four Signs of Love

The Four Signs of Love

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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I read an article a while back about 4 sign that a woman is into you. I thought the whole concept was interesting and I wrote about it.

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man, she not into you
does she lick her lips
as she tosses that angel hair
will she dress to the nine's
to show you she's oh so fine
with those shoes walking towards you
'cause if she don't, she doesn't care
get off your cloud of hope and expectation
come down to your lonely reality
come down to you lonely world


i tell you my friend
raise your head and try to discover
another woman to be your true lover
man, she's not into you
she only turns to you to be kind
can't you see that she still won't walk to you
her hair is still in place
with lips cold and dry with the though of you
just say game over and move on


why don't you get it
the signs are all there
the 4 horsemen have taken to their horses
and you are left unbridled in the stable
you're the detective without a clue
get over her and say goodnight
to all those dreams of being her fancy


Just accept the subtle hints of reality
and let her ride away with another
for soon you may discover
some walking their tossed hair
in elegant dress
and licked lips
right to your door

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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