The Objection

The Objection

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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Sort of inspired be the Graduate, what might have been going through Ben's mind when mulling everything over.

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I don't know if I believe it when they say
There's happy ending for everyone these days
Marriage and kids, two cars and a picket fence
I'm starting to think they lied about possibility


I'm the lonely one fifty yards from the alter
Sir I was the one in love with your daugther
She married someone else, and I'm upset
I wish I could have a Ben Braddock moment
And rush her away out of my dreams
But then what would I say, what would I say


I should be happy, I should feel blessed
Such a beautiful moment that I want to wreck
I guess I'm just a good enough for love
Or atleast of the one I desire
Oh Elaine please say no, come with me and go


In my mind it's perfect
In my mind it's right
We have the dream, we live alright
And everyday I make you happy
You being there makes mine
But what am I saying to myself inside
I have to tell myself the time has past
And learn to let go


And it's ok, I should tell myself
I'll find love with someone else
But every thought, every embrace
Will bring me back to her
Even after all hope is lost

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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