She Told of Day Dreams

She Told of Day Dreams

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield

She told me all about dreams
And what possibilities may come
When we slip into the subconscious
And let our awake reservations go


We will see a world beyond this
A place where dreams are truth
Where insight is precognitive
The raindrops taste like sweet marzipan
And the breeze on the sunny days, a comfort


She told me of these irrational things
This world, she said, was a turbulent dream
This world has too many breaks and relapses
And the only cure can be found inside
Beyond our outer selves, close to the heart
There is true reason freed from stoic brutality


I could not grasp this sugar coated notion
I have only been able to see the awake
But she said we all can see the dream
If we try and let go of the traps and controls we bind our minds with
If we jump in without fear and reservation
We can truly see what could be


So it is dreams where we must grow reason
Our light should shine from within
We must not hold on or hold back
The good nature we posses
If we learn to dream again
Life can be something more

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


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Great poem Congrats in the contest.

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Lovely dreams expressed with great imagery!
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Posted 16 Years Ago


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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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