You're Idle Again

You're Idle Again

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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Inspired by AIM, yes, that's right, AOL's Instant Messinger.

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i'm back around, yeah
your in town, but your idle


i can't see anything if you won't say
hello, what's with you
whatcha been up to
instead you're idle again


please send a message
let me know that you're around
please don't give me your automatic answer
give me the real
don't leave me idle


send me a message
let me know you're home
don't leave me idle


won't you help me
send me a message
i need to know you're there
talk to me if only for a moment
leave your idle ways
to end my lonely days


please don't post a premade answer
give me the real of your words
and whateve you do
please don't leave me idle again

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


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Great little write this about a subject I know about only too well!

Thanks for submitting this to my "Loneliness" contest Blake!

~ Helena ~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

irritating those answer machines! lovely poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 22, 2008

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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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