Energy

Energy

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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Another "Juliana Dando Project" piece. This one I would imagine the lead singer from K's Choice singing. This piece made me feel jumpy, like I had to do something.

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i've got all this energy, energy
please release it out of me
i've got this energy, synergy
please take it out of me 
i've got confusions in my mind, all around
i can't find where to be
i've got to use my head, outta time
no reason i can't see
but i've got this energy, imaging
exploding out of me 
no reason to loose my head, outta mind
i'm gone to search for me
conclusion, constitutions, retributions
loosing things meant to be
i've got this energy, synergy
no reason i can't be
all wrong with this energy, it's plain to see
i've gotta get outta me 
i've got energy, energy
energy inside of me
don't know what to do, can you help me
i've gotta set myself free
gotta leave this energy, enemy
i've got to release it from me 
i just wanna be free
i just wanna be free
i just wanna be free
i just wanna be free
i just wanna be free
releasing me and this energy
don't know how it's gonna be
all's i know is i gotta escape this energy
won't you release it from inside of me
'caue i just wanna be free
so i gotta escape this energy
for reasons i can't see
i'll loose this energy, energy
once things become true to me
all solution in energy, make it free
for reasons i can't see
will i find out with energy, in me
let's see if energy is destiny
today, tomorrow and forever

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


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Great song, I can feel myself dancing to this! Your words can't help but exude energy all around. You should take this further and make a dance song out of this! Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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