Velocity Girl

Velocity Girl

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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The first of 3 poems I wrote about a girl who could change the world

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Close your eyes
Take a look at what I can see
The stars shinning in your eyes
A beauty beyond light
Coming from the depths of your soul

 

Can't you see
Your greater than we wanted to be
Flying through time and space
Defeating the closet skeletons and reservations
Leading us all with a song and a smile

 

They all wonder from where you came
With the innocence of a child
And a wisdom light years beyond us all
Things lost to us and found by you

 

You're a ray of light in the darkest night
Showing us the way
I know I'll follow you anywhere you lead
To a better life and time

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


Author's Note

Blake Q Hatfield
Yes, I am a huge Velocity Girl fan, thus the title of the poem

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I really enjoyed your poem. It made me wish I was that girl who could do all that! Your poem is fresh and full of spirit. Excellent concept and poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 6, 2008

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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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