White liquid pearls
A Poem by
Blake Fodor
White liquid pearls, falling from an oyster heaven, coat of luminescence, sparkling majesty. As if, hidden in a flame of white lightning, blinding the eyes of winter's artistry, etched cathedrals hidden in glass, hosting the last supper to spring's birth.
© 2014 Blake Fodor
Reviews
Nicely chosen words give this a celestial quality of imagery, well expressed.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Cleverly written with a powerful delivery. Very nicely done!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Cleverly written with a powerful delivery. Very nicely done!
this is something special. It exclaims an intensity with its vivid imagery and evokes emotion
Posted 10 Years Ago
this is something special. It exclaims an intensity with its vivid imagery and evokes emotion
This is very original. I find myself really liking how you write-a bit in circles, bit understandable, reconnecting curves!
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is very original. I find myself really liking how you write-a bit in circles, bit understandable, reconnecting curves!
It's a beautiful poem Blake.
I think it can be interpreted in ways other than it's intended.
Or maybe as intended? :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
It's a beautiful poem Blake.
I think it can be interpreted in ways other than it's intended.
Or maybe as intended? :)
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Added on September 9, 2014
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