White liquid pearls

White liquid pearls

A Poem by Blake Fodor

White liquid pearls,
falling from an oyster heaven,
coat of luminescence,
sparkling majesty.

As if, hidden in a flame
of white lightning, blinding
the eyes of winter's artistry,
etched cathedrals
hidden in glass,
hosting the last supper
to spring's birth.

© 2014 Blake Fodor


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Nicely chosen words give this a celestial quality of imagery, well expressed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cleverly written with a powerful delivery. Very nicely done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is something special. It exclaims an intensity with its vivid imagery and evokes emotion

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very original. I find myself really liking how you write-a bit in circles, bit understandable, reconnecting curves!

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's a beautiful poem Blake.
I think it can be interpreted in ways other than it's intended.
Or maybe as intended? :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 9, 2014
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Blake Fodor
Blake Fodor

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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