White liquid pearls

White liquid pearls

A Poem by Blake Fodor

White liquid pearls,
falling from an oyster heaven,
coat of luminescence,
sparkling majesty.

As if, hidden in a flame
of white lightning, blinding
the eyes of winter's artistry,
etched cathedrals
hidden in glass,
hosting the last supper
to spring's birth.

© 2014 Blake Fodor


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Three words to describe this: Very amazingly awesome!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Really wonderful imagery. Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very nice!! ..........

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very nice and says a lot with few words. Keep writing my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aptly titled and illustrated to touch the reader with what is beyond reason and within emotional reach.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Full of heartfelt emotion-this has a smooth flow and a relatable theme

Posted 10 Years Ago


It is well written and deeply felt writing. It is emotional, personal and it flows well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Done skillfully and with smooth flow-a winner piece! Enjoyed...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love seasonal imagery, especially dealing with the changing of seasons, and you've nailed it here...lots of unique and colourful images in this one...nicely done Blake.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Elegantly written. The imagery is beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 9, 2014
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Blake Fodor
Blake Fodor

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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