no slave you be

no slave you be except to thee
and the things of which that made you

though not by divine will brought
but crashing bashing particles
that when caught

fleeing the dying stars
from which they're shot

in their crissing crossing
make a thing with thought

that can miraculously know the difference
between that it is

as opposed to it is not

Reviews

[Anne Timmins]

I appreciate the poetic value and the emotional affect this piece conveys. Thank you for sharing it

[John Anderson]

beautifully expressed! Very nicely done!

[K Scott Smith]

I enjoy reading your introspective observations. These writes have so much truth and wisdom

[Tricia Pattinson]

Great concepts expressed and very deep thinking indeed! May I suggest you meant "they're" and not "their"? A coma after "as opposed to" would be helpful to the reader.

[Mary Bosworth]

captivates the senses and melts upon the page. A wonderful pouring upon the screen.