i hate man

  i hate
man

but it's
hard to be
the thing
you hate
yourself

for
i find
i keep
making
excuses



just like
everybody
else

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

It is hard not to hate mankind with how destructive we can be, and yet how much are we really doing to remedy the situation? Great point made and received my friend.

[Sometimes Blood]

This is an amazingly interesting piece and so unique.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Aptly titled! I enjoy the openness of this write! It is smoothly flowed

[Mary C]

This is most definitely a cutting-edge, in-your-face piece. But you know what? I liked it.

[Anne Timmins]

Ahhh how entertaining this is!! Great write

[K Scott Smith]

This has a wonderful depth and smooth flow. Full of emotion,description and imagery.

[Vito]

Very cleverly done to the liking of this reader!

[Briana O'Connor]

An emotional, unique, entwinement of style and words. I like the way you structured the feeling on each line. I think that you could take this piece even further, adding in the whys and more emotional description. Thank you for sharing.

[Wandering Minstrel]

wow! This oozes with feeling and emotion, and it is penned quite uniquely

[Lauriegirl]

This is brilliantly penned and masterful