this is the most horrible thing

this is
the most
horrible
thing of all:

that though
the world
is beautiful

living
in it
isn't

Reviews

[Sometimes Blood]

You are such an astounding and wonderful writer. You can feel your heart in every thing you write. bravo!

[Vito]

smooth flow, an enjoyable read.

[Ashira Macy]

Simple yet beautiful and very true. There is so much beauty around us, but we very rarely get to experience it as we all go through our own personalized hells.

[Mary C]

this is quite unique. Good job my friend

[Anne Timmins]

A real thought provoking piece that gets one's ideas out and analyzed. Good stuff

[Susan Beth Horvath]

this is so lovely. A lot said in a few words

[Lauriegirl]

This is absolutely enchanting and so creatively penned. Beautiful job here

[Rita L. Sev]

This brief piece stops the reader short. Even an optimist must agree with your sentiment - yet we wake and seek the beauty still... Great piece, Blake.

[Tricia Pattinson]

I love it! Concise and to the point! Bravo!