Eating A Bluebell

if you could
eat the blue
of a bluebell
what would
it taste like
i wonder

tasteless

you cannot
eat the blue
of a bluebell

don't invent
forces to
satisfy your
hunger

Reviews

[Mary Bosworth]

A very good write with a strong current through it

[Susan Beth Horvath]

your words arrest the reader with whatever emotion you portray and they hold the attention as we drift along

[Tricia Pattinson]

Nice little ditty that gave a smile!

[John Anderson]

Cleverly written and quite unique. Well done!