Eating A Bluebell

if you could
eat the blue
of a bluebell
what would
it taste like
i wonder

tasteless

you cannot
eat the blue
of a bluebell

don't invent
forces to
satisfy your
hunger

Reviews

[Sometimes Blood]

This is so clever. Great write friend!

[Ashira Macy]

I once heard of someone who claimed they could taste color. They would blindly eat M&Ms and say what color they were. I forget where I saw that, but this made me think of it.

[Mary C]

I find this to be quite brilliant and very deep.

[Rita L. Sev]

Wow - there's a fascinating concept, and I think you have hit on a problem we have in this world... we try to force what cannot be forced, create problems so that we can arrogantly provide solutions... This has me thinking, Blake - which makes it a great poem!

[Wandering Minstrel]

Thank you for sharing such an amazing poem

[Lauriegirl]

this is quite different and uniquely appealing. Nice job

[K Scott Smith]

Good work - well structured

[Matching Socks]

Love it, I'm grinning huge. :D
Big finish! Priceless.

[Anne Timmins]

Phenomenal write and a phenomenal talent that you are to bless this site with such a work. Thank you