my lover's heart is very tart

my lover's heart
is very tart
and her love so soured where

of another's love
she want's no part

and for another's love
she says
why care

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

In such few words a message of emotion seeps into the soul; the beautiful art of poetry in which I so adore. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.

[Mary Bosworth]

Very well done. A fine piece