my lover's heart is very tart

my lover's heart
is very tart
and her love so soured where

of another's love
she want's no part

and for another's love
she says
why care

Reviews

[Sometimes Blood]

This is an excellent write

[Anne Timmins]

This is a beautifully descriptive piece which draws one inside the theme

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I like this very much, and I can relate to your heartfelt words here

[Wandering Minstrel]

simply delightful..what a nice piece of poetry..Thanks for sharing

[John Anderson]

This is so beautifully expressed and wonderfully written. Very nicely done!

[Tricia Pattinson]

I like this poem very much. Very creative and well written!

[Matching Socks]

Your lover is a very sweet little sour tart.
Beautiful one Blake.

[Lyn Anderson]

I get this, simple and to the point. One thing, I think you did not intend for want's to be possessive in this case.

[Mary C]

Short and to the point..nice one

[Ashira Macy]

Short and sour hm? Great work.