my lover's heart is very tart

my lover's heart is very tart

A Poem by Blake Fodor

my lover's heart
is very tart
and her love so soured where

of another's love
she want's no part

and for another's love
she says
why care

© 2014 Blake Fodor


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This is an excellent write

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a beautifully descriptive piece which draws one inside the theme

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this very much, and I can relate to your heartfelt words here

Posted 10 Years Ago


simply delightful..what a nice piece of poetry..Thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so beautifully expressed and wonderfully written. Very nicely done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this poem very much. Very creative and well written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your lover is a very sweet little sour tart.
Beautiful one Blake.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I get this, simple and to the point. One thing, I think you did not intend for want's to be possessive in this case.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short and to the point..nice one

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short and sour hm? Great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Blake Fodor
Blake Fodor

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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