Stillness

Stillness

A Poem by Blake Fodor

Stillness
slips as dew falls
over silent stone, the
cackling of cicadas
yellow, yellowed
falling silently; bad rum
gathers me in a meadow of Monet.

when on dark nights the mountain wolf loudly prays
and a hard rain is banging
lay no king to rest where mountain shade -
buries meadows where rivers splay
into the sea.

for there, a burning anger,
a wrath of love, pounds stone into the sea
and darkly writhes the flame
in mountain lover caves her eyes
they know me well there
a wisdom tethered by demise.

and we, once with wings of river and hearts
of wolves
plundered meadows of planets' stars
where love beholds and voices sigh
her hair so Raven

in the ocean's tidal wolf song rain.

© 2014 Blake Fodor


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This was so beautifully worded you left me reeling. So much beautiful imagery I found myself immersed in it. Very well done.

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This is such an amazing and contemporary kind of write with tons of heart..Good job

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you write so eloquently and with deep passion and heart,...this piece is very deep and thought inspiring.

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I love the simplicity yet still beautiful words of this piece

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unique poem with lovely descriptions

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This is very intriguing and beautifully introspective ..

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Such beautiful imagery in this one. An excellent poem my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is absolutely beautiful and quote ethereal. You write so wonderfully

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I like the imagery and strong beat through out. Well done!

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Blake Fodor
Blake Fodor

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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