Solitude

With patience, I ask for your emergence
Here by my side, where I am implied
While marching moments, mutely torments

An eternity, in severity
Has bestowed a union, of a companion-
No, not with your magnitude, but with solitude

I keep on talking, and unlocking
All my precious emotions, vast as oceans
And only on my friend hereby, do I rely

I keep on waiting, endurance initiating
But the pain, I cannot refrain,
It takes the breath, and touch in-depth

This heavy toll, wrenches my soul
But I must, keep the trust
On my wait, for times ahead

Or should I, untie-
This loop of pause, and eventually cross-
This border, of disorder!

At least this end, I have a friend
To share my presence, my innocence!
You have returned my youth, my new friend
 

- solitude…solitude…

Reviews

[Anne Timmins]

This is one interesting write and I truly enjoyed, Thank you for sharing

[Mary Bosworth]

Simply beautiful and so eloquently penned. I love the sheer elegance of your write

[Wandering Minstrel]

This amazing piece of poetry has a natural soulful feel

[John Anderson]

The power of these words move me deeply

[Mary C]

Beautifully detailed. Good work

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I love how your passion spills forth.. Your style truly beats like a heart..

[Ashira Macy]

Loved the rhyme of this one, a lot of them were very clever and it was an unusual setup. Solitude can be a plague or a privilege depending on your perspective, and you make that clear in this.

[Lyn Anderson]

A really nice write. You have a quiet way of expressing yourself, that leaves lots of room for thought.

[Rene Velez]

Wonderful wordplay and content, there is a silent strength to these words that ignites a fire, well done.

[Matching Socks]

What a great write. Really enjoyed this, how you've come full circle with memories of youthful times.
Bring alone allows us the time to lay things to rest but I think ultimately it would drive us mad.