that egotist siddhartha

siddhartha and
all those
disciples

a holy man
with an
entourage?

sounds like
celebrity
to me

and that
begging thing

still the same
old rotten princely
thinking

just
in a different
kingdom

still expecting
others
to fork out
their hard won
efforts

for nothing
more in
return than
a smile
from a
delusional
egoist

Reviews

[Sasha]

Wow..
Beautiful !
Loved it !

[Vito]

This is very cleverly done!

[Sometimes Blood]

This is very well-penned my friend. It has a dark and mysterious feel to it.

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i think is very funny poem. realy make me laugh. few words can make strong poem . when you put them at right way . like you did. and don t trust any guru. but your self.

[Mary C]

This was brilliantly done, I really enjoyed this

[Susan Beth Horvath]

The writing is relatable and real, emotional and it has poetic value. Fervently expressed.

[John Anderson]

A unique and beautifully expressed poem. This is very nicely written.

[Wandering Minstrel]

Your images are so sharply defined... these, and your singular vocabulary, mark this as yet another triumph! BRAVO

[Matching Socks]

:-) good write, short and to the point.

[A. Amos]

Compelling and strong poetry...interesting piece of writing and truly enjoyable read!