Happiness

Freewriting.

I curl up on an empty thought
With pain and misery I am distraught
To think is simply to be alone
I've shed it all to only bone
Something new to ease the pain
I wish it was just simple and plain
Becoming numb to everything
as I try to find my new happy
Nothing seems to work anymore
Now back to lying on the floor
I cannot breathe and in such despair
Wondering why happiness is not there.

Author's Note

I wrote this on the spot as I had this page open. it took me about 5 minutes.

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing poem dude.

[Blake Blackstone]

Thanks guys.

[Caitlyn Blake]

aww.,i love this

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good poem. It flowed really well. Happiness takes time depending on what your situation is in the first place...you know? Anyways I liked it as normal. I loved the flow forgot to mention as well as imagery...good job all in all :D.