S**t

Open for your own personal meanings. I have my own.

Her lips were scarred and mind was stained
Her mouth exposed amongst sin
Eyes wide open, in for the force
She let everybody short of me in

Fallen beside the weak and frail
I must become a dog to eat
before it's too late for society to allow
I just want a little treat

Reviews

[Blake Blackstone]

Thank you Alan. :)

[alan peter kelly]

sweet little jab to the ribs at the end of the first stanza...and brilliant turns of phrase that are tidily composed....i am glad to have stumbled upon your work...

[Blake Blackstone]

The "I must become a dog to eat" part is a metaphor, a less direct and more symbolic way of saying I need to be a dick and forceful upon females to get laid.

[morningstar]

the beggining was pretty good, I'm just confused on the dog part. Nice job :)

[HorrorMaster]

lmao amazing poem dude.

[Blake Blackstone]

Thank you.. LOL.. I told you.... I can;t write anything positive.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Wow...
You totally twisted that around...
LOL oh well nice job.
Thanks for sharing.