By The Way

By The Way

A Poem by Blake Blackstone
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Lyrics to my song called "By The Way" listen to the song while you read the lyrics here at www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother

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You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

You
want
me
dead
you
want
me
gone
I
feel
the
pain
..creeping up on me..

(By the way) x4

You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

You
want
me
dead
you
want
me
gone
I
feel
the
pain
..creeping up on me..

(By the way) x4

You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

© 2010 Blake Blackstone


Author's Note

Blake Blackstone
Lyrics to my song called "By The Way" listen to the song while you read the lyrics here at www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother

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Good music. The audio was a bit stat-icy.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice job man both with learics and performence i noticed the cobain poster right fukin on i love nirvana though lately i play mostly black metal,you might actwally be intrested in some of my writes there pretty dark but that seems your style
again verry brutal ,QoS

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it a lot! BUT! ... Too repetitive for me. Might work as showing a constant anger, yet I think It doesn't work like that here. I'd stick to the lines up to "creeping on me". As for music it is really good! Not so much into the screaming style but It adds extra emotions to the lyrics =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Umm. what can i say i like the back ground music. The screaming though is not my cup of tea. Although I could see this being a Gothic Metal number one hit. I don't listen to Metal though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I am not feeling this, such anger and hostility. But great guitar playing...... just not my kind of music.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hmph
I'm in resentment....
My speakers don't work on my computer, so I can't hear the music.
So I can't really judge this clearly.
The lyrics are, plain.
I'm sorry.
I don't like giving these critiques, and I'm not saying your emotion does not count, because it very much does. But it repeats the same thing three times.
Add more variety.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very strong words. Only anger and disappointment in the words. I like the pace of the words. Sometime better to escape before we do something we will regret. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it a lot hon! Great lyrics, great to see music here too :) xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


I am so writing a story based on it. Insane hell will be out soon once I work on it. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 9, 2010
Last Updated on September 14, 2010
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Blake Blackstone
Blake Blackstone

Miami, FL



About
My name is Blake Blackstone, I make music and I also am a filmmaker. My (one man) band's name is Drowning Your Mother. www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother I also have a have a website that I made m.. more..

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