Weaker

Weaker

A Poem by Blake Blackstone
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Please listen to the song "Weaker" while you read the lyrics ( or not ) at www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother

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Why the f**k do you want me
to lose control of things
I can't take much more
dying outside rotten core
Giving up
with apathy
Everyone is
against me
Bleeding out
mentally

(What I see that you can't see
will make you/me think that I'm crazy) x4

Why won't I f*****g die?
Take a deep breath, look inside
Scrounge strength to carry on
Knowing that it's all wrong
You all live
happily
Giving in
I'm suffering
Hating life
real badly

(What I see that you can't see
will make you/me think that I'm crazy) x4

I'm giving up and giving in
I wish I wasn't this strong
I would have ended it long ago
I spend my time helping others
and I'm left stuck in the rain
I try to keep up this facade
I refrain from complain
Giving up
on everything
everyone is
against me
bleeding out
mentally
You all live
so happily
Giving in
I'm suffering
Hating life
real badly

(What I see that you can't see
will make you/me think that I'm crazy) x8

© 2010 Blake Blackstone


Author's Note

Blake Blackstone
Please listen to the song "Weaker" while you read the lyrics ( or not ) at www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother

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i really like how you expressed emotions boldly and no fear:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I thought this was awesome. Good job on the lyrics. I'm gonna listen to song now. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Pretty good song, I thought it was amazing.


Posted 14 Years Ago


This was very interesting to read, keep up the good work!

100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 9, 2010
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Blake Blackstone
Blake Blackstone

Miami, FL



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My name is Blake Blackstone, I make music and I also am a filmmaker. My (one man) band's name is Drowning Your Mother. www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother I also have a have a website that I made m.. more..

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