Rainy Ending

Somehow I knew 

I would be the one

It was all new

Now it's nothing more 

Than a painful scar

Just like the one

That will be on 

Your heart 

When you realize 

The mistake you made 

And I won't be here 

Cuz I'm not gonna 

Feel sorry

For myself 

I'm gonna pick up 

the pieces

And move on 

To something better 

And it won't be a 

Rainy Ending 

Reviews

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Wonderful write, beautiful

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Such a beautiful poem, heartfelt and full of emotions! I love the ending! "You tell him girl!!"

[Nishant Gupta]

good one , read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

[Paradiddle]

heyy, i loved this!! really emotional and i could relate to it entirely! like Chris said maybe you could expand it a little bit more, but regardless i really enjoyed the read!

[Chris Taylor]

Hey, neat little poem here. I could feel the emotion of being spurned and left alone. I like the lines: "Now it's nothing more that a painful scar just like the one that will be on your heart." I think it would be cool if you did a part 2 of this poem and expanded on the idea of a Rainy ending as a cleansing of one's soul.
I enjoyed the read. Please take the time to review one of my pieces as well.

God Bless