The Anonymous Ventriloquists of Fucktard Utopia

The Anonymous Ventriloquists of Fucktard Utopia

A Poem by Hawkmoon

polka dots invade the waiting room
where the image of the Honeybee
is dissolving on the Carpenter's tongue,
a tense scene of endless senselessness
until the fish switch over like a television set
reminding the Doctor there is business
to be done on the other side of the stethoscope,
some oscillating ominous noumenon of blue blue 
pulses ululating in unfinished denouement,
when the face 
ignites like a cadillac of catholic atheism,
the disbelief 
that anything could be happening other than the 
color
green and red, some strange being that is not a fish at all,
swimming through the light 
oblivious to all philosophy 
not being written by the Sunlight 
or the fluorescence of the waiting room,
where the woman that looks like a cross between Mother Theresa
and Katherine Hepburn is studying the emptiness
that is actually empty,
the clock ticking like a ventriloquists' heart
when the Mime 
is not listening 

© 2012 Hawkmoon


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you are quite the philosopher , an observer in abstract eloquence .

I am a synesthete , my senses are uniquely connected , my blue has sound taste and texture , I hear the music in everything, and that time thing ... ticking ... it is in that pause , yeah that's when you hear it ... awareness - perspective - the mind - the puzzle infinite




Posted 11 Years Ago


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More academic I suspect than I guess many might imagine, although that might just be a major misconception of mine and if that is the case, I am truely sorry but not in an apologetic way but because I can see, smell, feel, taste and hear greens, browns, greys blue and have often wondered why a carrot is more orange than an orange.

You made me think of Rumblefish which was good. You also reminded me that the 120 year old wall clock I bought at auction was destroyed when dropped whilst being packed late last night and for me, all ticking is momentarily suspended.

I enjoyed this work, thank you, N

Posted 11 Years Ago


Neville

11 Years Ago

I meant I enjoyed your work Hawkmoon, N
you are quite the philosopher , an observer in abstract eloquence .

I am a synesthete , my senses are uniquely connected , my blue has sound taste and texture , I hear the music in everything, and that time thing ... ticking ... it is in that pause , yeah that's when you hear it ... awareness - perspective - the mind - the puzzle infinite




Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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