FED UP

I have bent over backwards and went the extra mile,
rubbed my face in the mudd to make you smile,
made a fool of myself to gain your trust,
so what else do I have to do so that there will be a "us"?
well how about this, let's change sides of the table for a bit,
and you tell me how far will you go to show me you want to get with this,
how about you surprise me with a candle light dinner and some encouraging words to reassure me that you really want this to work,
how about you get on your knees and procalim in front on your friends, not mines that from here on out your gonna put me first,
and get rid of your little black book of late-night hook-up's ,
you say they are just friends well why can't I meet them along with their girlfriends and wives and we all go on a double date,
is that to much to ask ? or will there be another excuse like they said they are going through some things with their woman so "we" got to wait,
see you cant slick a can of oil and there's nothing new under God's bright sun,
and thinking I am just gonna sit back and let you and you so-called friends make a fool of me,well ladyfriend I ain't the one,
see I love who I am even though you dont realize what you got,
and I refuse to be disrespected and pushed to the back like a second hand car that no one wants in the back of the carlot,
I am a B.M.W and in case you don't know that means a "BLACK MALE WANTED",
and I will be blessed with a woman who will look forwarded to being by my side and to be loved and flaunted ,
maybe I didnt meet your standards but I dont see it like that ,I think you the one who didn't meet mines,
cause I put you first and your footsteps will be forever imbedded in the sands of my mind,
so let's be real your wasting my time and your also wasting yours,
so I will be a gentleman one more time and escort you out the door.
Tony Po'
Ghetto Poetry

Reviews

[TAO]

Haha, this is righteous. I liked this. Reminds me of all the ones I had to escort to the door. Very real piece of work, sir. I like that B.M.W. line, too. I'll have to start throwing that at ladies myself, just so they know that I know that I'm more than enough. Encouraging, to say the least.