I'm not here..

You can't see me, I don't exist, a figment of my imagination,

You see a smile on my face but your senses deceive you,

You can touch me and feel flesh but it's not really there.

I'm not here...

Author's Note

One of my first very short poems. Would appreciate any feedback.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Reading this reminds me of a little piece I wrote 'Manipulator'.
The theme here is the same.
Deceiving others can be so easy sometimes (most of the times for me) 😛
Could this be about ghosts? Just wondering..
I liked it. Short, but I kind of found it amusing 😉

[Lovecraft]

This is mostly based around the theme of Identity.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh right, cool! Thank you for clarifying ☺ my review seems lame now lol 😛

[Lovecraft]

Well, I purposefully made it fairly vague. ;P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah okay 😛

[AYVID N]

I liked it a lot. It gave me a spooky kind of feeling at the first reading. Later, reading it again, I realize it could be a brilliant portrayal of an everyday situation. How often we are there without actually being so. I blame my phone.

[Lovecraft]

Thanks. This is the shortest poem I've ever written so I wasn't sure it would work the way I wanted it to. But it did. It's meant to be a bit weird/spooky.

This is kind of a portrayal of Derealization.