Sour and Acidic

Her mother is sour,
And his mother too,
Maybe I will be sour,
Unlike a banana which
Doesn't have the tang
An orange does, purity
Has sprung up out of his
Astounding lips like oceans
Make me a lover in his domain,
Drunken by his affection

Reviews

[wordman]

sweet sentiment,a beautiful poem of love,
over coming the sour parents