Emozionato, emozionare, empirico

Excited to have met a man finally;
Mentored by older men. Women buy

Oil, fry sliced vegetables in a pan,
Throwing out rotten meat.  The onions cry

“Stock market,” throw us in the stock, woman’s
Imperative for dinner, it’s do or die,

Omission of faults, not really seeing
Notes on magic.  I’ve forgotten how to fly.

Apiece, one apiece she says, doling out.
Throwing off her cloak she hangs it up, sly.

Oil change for her car, sly as a fox, she
Excites him asking him Taps, God is nigh

Mentioning nothing, she is frantically
Offal, just the product of harvests.  Pry.
 
Tighten. Pineapple Juice in its tin can.
Subcommittees await the verdict, apply

Infantile tactics to proprietors.
Orchids wait in their regal aisle next to rye.

Nimble store clerks sample the toast and cheese.
Admittance to the theatre shall never go awry.

Repairmen come to fix gadgets or cabinets.
Enacting new policies, the old yet spry.

Enamel is rebuilt for continuance;
Muttering under her breath, a shapely thigh

Prerogatives the starlit infantry,
Infantry of peripatetic fairies, sky

Repatriated by callous clouds.
Inferiority complexes made shy,

Crackles the television like a fire,
Ordained evening heat for which I comply…

Author's Note

what can i do with this?

Reviews

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I CAN REALLY ADMIRE THIS. VERY SIMPLE WORDS MAKE DEEP STRONG FEELING. I AM NOT GOOD WRITE AT REVIEWS. IT S HARD SAY WHAT I REALY THINK. IT S JUST NICE I LOVE IT. CONECTION IN BETWEEN WORDS AND WHAT THEY EVOKE AT MY HEAD. I AM SORRY FOR MY STUPID REVIEW .

[Laura Lynn]

Thanks, I think what you write is really deep inherently, that's hard to say what a person thinks since it's changing so often unfortunately, maybe it changes what we think and then maybe there are some things we just keep thinking over and over again, thanks for reading, it sucks to not be read, I wonder if it makes sense to write and write and write if no one reads it, will it help me, it's just like reading a book to, I have no idea where it will take me, but I believe it will carry me some place, some good place or destination, I may think it is one, but I am open to various ambient or ambiguity, I suppose, that is too vague though sorry, some say there is never any need to apology, but I was used to saying sorry also, it even seems like it could be not quite polite but good ? Thanks,

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there is lot of examples writers who what dont read for long time. for me i dont write to get publish by some publisher. i just want find people who feel same like me. if no one read me. i will be write anyway. it s help me understant my self and why i get so many troubles. that s all. about sorry. i have one friend from Australia. and when he is drunk he always say. never explain never feel sorry.