Skid

the words in red are his, the words in other colors are my add ins. The yellow highlighting and red color are the colors he chose.

Skid-        poem written with kid

·         Sinks the day into the night, but that is not the same as a                             sink.
Balls,              red balls bounce, bounce bounce, bounce bounce, bounce bounce
Ask me if my kid writes as well as yours and I would say, probably not.
Now ‘wootie’ means you’re going to hold it with your hand.
Dinnertime.  He is eating cold chicken, Souped out
And we laughed. Now this is a scary one but they come out at night and
They go shozuzuzhuzhu and they kind of die, says he,
And I feel a premonition, but I know that is just life

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Reviews

[KWP]

This is just fabulous ... I love it - I can just picture him chatting away and telling you all of these things and to weave it into a memento of time - priceless ... Well Done xx