Revelation of best friends

Revelation of best friends

A Poem by Laura Lynn
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A GASP
Hi, best friends.  I wanted a best friend too. All the Rage Italic.
It isn’t cute.  From experience he knows it won’t work and he’s glad.
This is what I need to tell myself by way of reprimand, for I know that
No one hides away like this in this ghost house like me, so prettily lonely to myself
               (unattractive in self-centeredness)
All alone is not so bad this evening because I am not truly alone, but with a child.


So afraid of false visions.  Distant remunerations of experience.  I
Hit the floor with my feet like the other women in the dance room.
Friend not best, though a best of bests, let me wear a vest, let me beat my breast, or tap
Umbrellas like a cane and be Fred.  I know how to butter the bread.  or Not.
T his is what I write and it is mine and it is happily without rule or difficulty: lazy.

© 2014 Laura Lynn


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Best friends bring out all our secrets, at least mine. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank Laura Lynn.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I enjoyed this piece thoroughly. I love the title, 'revelation of best friends' It definitely fits the writing. I enjoyed the way this writing flowed, very good!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Best friends reveal all sort of things to each other every day. Enjoyed the write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Laura Lynn
Laura Lynn

Fairfax, VA



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