Gargle the Salt Sea

Gargle the Salt Sea

A Poem by Laura Lynn

Gargle this salty water from the sea.
I treasure this moment in quiet space.
Risking loneliness for an unknown prize.

Gentleman, your every bone is lovely,
Unreal as ten little Indians in
Rounds. You know what I mean, don’t you, someone?

© 2014 Laura Lynn


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I want to say I know exactly what you mean
But I just dont.

It is intriguing though
Sensual maybe? ?

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this very much. So simple and yet so intense. So clear and yet full of unknown.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Laura Lynn
Laura Lynn

Fairfax, VA



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