Om

Come
Huckster:
A
Merchant

FATHERHOOD AVHUT

Almost
Vaunt, flaunt but I know where
Housewares can be bought.
Untrue new control, N +CTRL.
The new order is here now.

FATHERLESS YATOM

You
Accept
This
Of
Me?

FATHERLY

A
Bold
Acrid
Humiliation,
Improved her stance the next day.

FATHOM

Far
Across
Torn
Occidental
Misspellings.

TO FATHOM
 
Leaping
Eccentrically
Hailing
Avenues.
Veronica’s
Improvements?
Nice. How did she improve the document? the room? What did she improve?

FATHOMABLE
No, no, no.
Improvidence is like a
Trademark.  I am too
Arrogant because I feel so, that
Now I have conquered time…

Lists tell you how little I know.
Amy breaks sticks into pieces.
Humidity makes us feel that our
Arms are sweating; one pulls a
Vine out of the ground and says
Aha!  I would say that sometimes.
Nathan accrues telephones.
Amy waits beside the old lines.

FATHOMLESS

Tractability: teachable.  The docile
Evangelical Fetus, too deep to hit
Housemothers. I think I would sink
Om, Holy, Syllable, sink into his
Mendicant’s mansion with
Improvident, wayward notions.

FATIGUE

“Actually,” he says, he is so cute,
“You didn’t…” I can’t remember.
East is a direction I think about too
Frequently.  What directions take
Us where we want to go?  Maybe
Too many paperclips can make for
Hour hands, some creative clock
Impudence.  Maybe it’s not a
Tornado? Maybe it’s a hurricane.
A rap song will add some jazz to
Your day, a little caffeine for you,
For you to multitask which might
Unmake us, or make us better.
To tire will only bring us dreams all

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Mapping out a writing so that it may be understood is a hard task. I just don't feel that you care if anyon does or not indeed understand were you are coming from. I don't even feel you have set this up to be a riddle like my good mate Waconda does but after saying that there are obvious aspects for me to relate to. The association to conceptualism and abstractions. The feeling that the stream of thought is sequential, that although inviting and it is synonym with effort as one has to think to try to put the sequnece together. I get the feeling that your subject is about relations, it is about the daily life. In a very mysterious way I feel embraced by the writing.

Oh, so very intriguing.

Thankyou