Time!

Time!

A Story by Black Rose

A second,
yes!
Just a SECOND is enough to get impressed by someone, a Moment to fall for someone, a Split Second of eye contact to realize he/she is special, a Minute to win somebody's heart, an Hour talk to be understood by someone, a Day to realize we are for Eternity
And then there it takes just another Second to break all your dreams, just another Moment to let you fall on the ground, just another Minute to realize -you commit a mistake, just another Hour to make you feel alone and just another Day and you will be on the same track with no motion, you will be standing there and watching yourself getting ruined.

© 2017 Black Rose


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The importance of a second is explained wonderfully... Time is indeed precious and a single second and make or break someone
An excellent read

Posted 6 Years Ago


Black Rose

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Elizabeth

6 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Thats so true :)
So true!
It happens naturally!
Just that sometimes its difficult to see ourselves devastate!

Lovely piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


Black Rose

6 Years Ago

Yes and it feels like you are dying n number of times
Your story shows that we should not always go by first impressions. They do say that a love that grows slowly, lasts longer! Hopefully, after she gets 'ruined' another spark of love will come along

Posted 7 Years Ago


Black Rose

7 Years Ago

Yes hopefully :)
Thats creative,, i prefer the latter half more though...

Keep it up black rose..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Black Rose

7 Years Ago

Hahaha okay! I suggest you should write your real name. 😂
AcasualPawn

7 Years Ago

See i accepted your suggestion
Black Rose

7 Years Ago

Hahaha! I am glad :)

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