Mom!

Mom see bhai(brother) is fiddling with my phone tell him to give my phone back. Why are you staring at me mumma, tell him to give it back.
Why you are staring me blankly mom why you always pretend that i'm the only one creating the chaos? Why you always give me death glares why me..?
Huh! I hate you I know you'll never gonna say a word to him. But whatever I know he was and will be your dear child.
I'm going to my friend house don't call me okk.....
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Hey see I need a favour i'm planning a birthday surprise for my mom. will you help me? Me and bro gonna throw a party and will invite her friends what say?
Ugh again this stare! Why are you looking shocked, my god everybody is insane I mean did I say something wrong nobody is answering me just looking at me like they have seen the ghost. Now will you stop staring and blurt something.
Whatever take your time and think about my plan.
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Bro why everyone is asking me if i'm okay. Did something happen? I mean I really don't remember the last time i wasn't well but other's reactions makes me think otherwise
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What mummy why are you showing so concern i'm fine and yes I got late cuz I was with bro... What why are you crying now I know you think i'm insane you think bro is no more but momma he is here see and I know I was unconscious for few days nd that made you think that i'm not in my senses.. Yes of course I know I wasn't well.. What kind of question is this mom of course bro told me about that see I told you he is real. See he is coming towards us and see we can see his reflection in the mirror he is real.
Yeah bro i'm talking to mumma. What the heck mumma says you are not here now you are saying mom isn't with us
Can't you both see each other's reflection..


Wait, momma where's momma, momma
Shut up bro mom was here why you won't believe me. No! momma please
Come, no more hiding they think I am stupid mumma please you can't do this to me. Mom they think you are dead please mom don't play with me now come mumma.

Author's Note

Well yeah it's not a script play. It's just one sided dialogue. I know that doesn't sound good but I just wanted to show her emotion and not anyone's role. I just hope you will see the actual emotion I wanted to show.

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

You are extremely brilliant in putting words together in a form of story!

[Black Rose]

To be honest I am not I am still learning and trying but thank you for appreciating my work :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

always :) Thankyou soo much !

[Tony Jordan]

You really did this one well BR.
:)

[Black Rose]

Thank you for reviewing it. It means a lot :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

I think you have projected into this persons dilemma and feelings very well. I got a clear idea of what was going on for her. I am glad it is fiction, otherwise I would feel like finding a way to help her. Good for you for writing this.

[Black Rose]

Thank you. Yes it's totally from my mind and heart and not from reality.

[AcasualPawn]

Its really effective. After reading first paragraph i thought it has touch of male dominant society of india... But its really surprising and touching....
Thankyou rose for creating this story....

[Black Rose]

I am glad you like it :)

[Paul Bell]

I'm trying to think of the big fantastic word that covers this. Mummy's not dead. Why cant everybody else not see this. I suppose it's keeping people alive, and close to you.

[Black Rose]

Well it's just a fictional one I just had this urge to feel the emotion of the people who are unfortunate :)

[Paul Bell]

You did it well.

[Black Rose]

Thank you! :)