A lost dream

A lost dream

A Story by Black Rose

At a very tender age she joined her family business. Making the colorful bangles in one of those shabby and dark room of a slum. She always dreamed about wearing those bangles. Imagined her wrist flaunting those beautiful colors. Everyday, she was getting one step closer to her dream.
Finally, her dream came true.She was standing in front of the mirror with colorful bangles in her wrist. But all she could do was imagine those colors are accentuating her beauty. Though the time has changed, but the dreams, those dreams are still the same. She provided others with happiness at the cost of her own. Sacrificed her sight to bring colors into other's lives. But she will always see those colors through her memories. Even if she is surrounded by darkness now.

© 2017 Black Rose


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Black Rose
I am new here and maybe you feel like it's an amateur writing. Yes it is. I write to relax my mind. :). I appreciate honest reviews. Will motivate me to write better

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A dark yet beautiful story.It was really heart touching.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Black Rose

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Another good premise. A very good premise if I am reading it right - she wants the bangles - she works hard to get them - poor conditions cause her to lose her sight - she can afford the bangles but can no longer see. A tale of 'watch what you wish for'. But the telling of this is very convoluted. Just needs work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Black Rose

7 Years Ago

Yes she wanted the bangles and she worked really hard for her by making bangles for others(it's her .. read more

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Black Rose

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