Foolish

Foolish

A Poem by Js.
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dated 13.08.05

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For keeping my heart under your spell
For allowing myself to trust you
For still believing you’re someone worth fighting for
For not being strong enough to forget you

I can’t chase you away or keep myself at safe distance
Distant from you

Foolish…from the moment I let you become a part of me
Shouldn’t have…
No regrets though, that moment none  of us will ever forget
Even if we tried
I’m just foolish
For thinking what you felt was Love
 

© 2008 Js.


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so true. it flows well. thanks for a great poem

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well my friend what a wonderfully penned poem

The style and tempo, word selection etc. could not have been better

A joy to read.. I shall read it again�

Amazing


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Js.
Js.

Maputo, Mozambique



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Like many others, my sense of writting is anything but 'normal' (whatever that is). I write what I feel, its deeply real, people often misunderstand it, mistaking it for depression. Being dark and b.. more..

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