Simple

My love is too Simple

Simple,not too much and not too little

 

Simple love suitable for any appropriate Day

A Simple free Life is Simple to Say

But he's a Simple Guy and he doesn't know Why,That on a Simple Day

That Simple Guy is Going to get hit by a Simple Bullet

That will end his Simple Life

Simple Decision before the Bullet Flies

Simple Reason that the Same Guy Dies

 

Simple People on a Simple Planet

That Fight Wars that could simply be Ended

It Doesn't Matter if you are a Saint or a Sinner,Loser or a Winner,a Expert or a Simple Beginner

Just Simply be your Self and be True to your Self!

 

#Black_P0eT

Reviews

[Mercedes Sanchez]

this poem really took me by surprise as soon as i read line 6, i didnt think it would end like it did and i like that. this poem has alot of truth in it

[Fabio_Cassilias]

Thanks Dear.

[Androglossia]

I like lines 5-9 because it's so true. Many have died because of reckless decisions that could have simply been re-evaluated. Thousands of killings could have simply been avoided.

Your poem speaks the truth.

You're good at using the free verse form however since it is free verse, proper usage of lines and stanzas is important because they can separate, compare or contrast thoughts expressed in different units particularly where the poem is not written in a formal metrical pattern.

[Fabio_Cassilias]

Thank you.I'll Take Note.
it is Appriciated.

[Fabio_Cassilias]

Thank u:)

[Blue Ivory]

This is simply awesome lol
It's nice, I really like it. It's entertaining.