Cupid's Footsteps

Carnage,Mayhem when Disaster struck

But I was still keeping it cool from the start

My loneliness let him get away with a few darts

 

It was someone i didn't really expect to hear from again

Mister Cupid with his love bow,Targeting lonely men again

I already moved on believe,I don't need no one my friend

When it comes to your Love,

I rather stay single for this weekend

Too many Heartbreaks and headaches

some might say it's the perfect blend

 

Too much of the same,can lead to ordinairy minds going insane

Cupid footsteps are most of the time to blame

The Bravehearts like a bit a Gentlemen's adventure

While the Wildhearts are more easier to Tame

 

My Young Heart is dried out,it will never be the same

Like a flower stuck in the middle of a drought

Really I am sick and tired looking for the Rain!

 

#Black_P0eT

Author's Note

i know there are too many capital letters but thats me expressing my self thank you

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

This is a cute little poem, but big in its depth and meaning, concerning love in its right and wrong perceptions.

'Like a flower stuck in the middle of a drought,
really I am sick and tired looking for the rain'.

That above picture is a wonderful simile.
That is poetry at its most simple and best, using vivid simple imagery to make a point that is much more deeper.

WELL DONE

[Blue Ivory]

Actually, the capital letters didn't bother me at all. This is a lovely poem where you express how fed up you are and how tired you are. Honestly cupid doesn't leave anyone alone does he? It's his game. It pleases him I guess, giving us false hope and when we do fall for it, he takes it all away, saying his arrow's expired. I really like how you say Cupid plays with the feelings of lonely men and I like how you emphasize on the loneliness. And how you're tired of this cycle. It really adds a nice touch.