L0ve and Hate

Don't show l0ve,

Because l0ve get's killed by Hate.

Hate get's destroyed by Jealousy.

Jealousy get's Twisted by illusions.

Illusions will make u love the same thing u Hate.

Life is a Cycle,Let it Rotate.!

 

#Black_P0eT

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

I like the paradoxical aspect (life's contradictions) aspect of this poem.
I like how you used contrast of love and hate, jealousy, illusions...
to illustrate the cyclic nature of life.

In the last line you say, 'Life is a cycle, let it rotate!'
I definitely agree on that. Once we learn to understand, through our various and specific experiences, that life is full of ups and downs, then we learn to take it 'easy' and become more compassionate, understanding and merciful. Because people have their flaws like ourselves. But still Justice propels us forward to try our utmost best to help those in less fortunate circumstances.

This poem is inspiring like a good advice.

WELL DONE

[BLACK PRINCE]

REAL TALK

[nigrum homonculus]

damn, this is definitely true. i for one experienced first hand everything you just said here. well done. a definite gem

[EMMIE]

Wow that's the cold truth right there. Short and sweet and the way you wrote those words...unique lol