Friends, a different side

Friends, a different side

A Poem by Kurai.Merodi

People say that the scariest thing is when:
a "friend" stabs you in the back.

I say it's scariest when they stab you in the front.

© 2015 Kurai.Merodi


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Yeah true...True friends stab you in the front!
Very nice hey!
Aphy

Posted 9 Years Ago


Haha cute concept and nicely worded.

Really liking the cynical tone and simplicity of the poem.

However, line three - do you mean 'scariest thing'? Or, 'I say it's scarier when...'
Just wondering because it is perfect in its simplicity, but wanted to make sure it makes sense too. Unless this was on purpose - in which case, ignore me :)

Cool stuff!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kurai.Merodi

9 Years Ago

Thanks, and no it wasn't on purpose, i was just rushing it while I was writing because I'm in school.. read more
Jane P.

9 Years Ago

No worries! Loved the poem :) Simple ones are always the best, because the message is so clear.

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Kurai.Merodi
Kurai.Merodi

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