Black Flames

I want you to interpret this how you want

Open air surrounds me

Bringing me closer and closer to you

Wind makes me dance

Jumping higher and higher

The rain shows me the way

Leading me out of this maze

My thoughts enclose me

My heart desires

But what?

I wonder

But why?

I ponder

A sudden jolt awakens me

A thunder clap

A lightning flash

Drops fall on my knees

With the oura of death

My blue sky turned grey

Clouds thinkened

Can't catch my breath

I choke on my crys

Falling to the ground

Falling like a rock

I was once so graeful

Now I'm stuck in the middle of black flames

Left believing some one will come

Some one will find me

But left to wait

To shriek

But no one to hear

No one to help

Can you understand this poem?

Can you relate?

Can you help?

Author's Note

I did this with a clear subject in veiw becaue I want you to interpret this any way you want ^w^ Please say how you interpret this I realy want to know

Reviews

[Peach]

Life was once happy and fun. But reality has pounced at an unfortunate time. The protagonist is now trapped without anyone to cling on to and depend on...
That's all I could type...

[613]

My favorite lines:

"But what?
I wonder

But why?
I ponder"

Very beautiful piece. You did such a great job on this. Keep up the awesome work!

- Brittney

Also, if you wouldn't mind checking out my novel, HIM, I'd truly appreciate it. (:

[Kurai.Merodi]

Thanks :3 glad you liked it

And I will if I have time. From what I read so far, it sounds interesting

[613]

You're welcome! (:
Thank you. The thing is, I'm leaving this site by the end of the week. If you're still interested though, I suggest checking out my website www.himthenovel.com to read (polished) chapters of HIM, along with other cool things - like an Audio Podcast, videos, the story behind why I wrote it & much more!

[Kurai.Merodi]

oooooh cool!! Sound awesome, i'll take a gander

[613]

Thanks! That'd be so great! :D

[Kurai.Merodi]

^w^ anytime