I run...

What I feel like i'm doing all the time...

Running through a dark forest

Only light source is the crescent moon

I look up at the smiling silver arch 

It's laughing

It's laughing at me

I run faster, faster

Not screaming as I know no one will come

Only fast pants come out

How do I get out?

Where's the exit?

Is there an exit?

Will some one hear?

Will some one help?

Will they even worry?

I sprint

Not knowing where the exit is

Not knowing if there's a chance

But still I run

I run 

and run 

and run 

and run

and...

Reviews

[yvo miki]

wow if I was there I would take my sword and cut the fuckers head off no one messes with my friends

[steven]

haha, best review ever

[Kurai.Merodi]

LOVE IT!! Hahaha >.< least I know who to go to when someone is chasing me ^.^ Thanks

[yvo miki]

lol ur welcome im always here for my friends

[Kurai.Merodi]

^.^ Thanks

[yvo miki]

ur welcome

[Luna Chan]

Whoa yvo.... That's AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^

[yvo miki]

its not my work but ya it is

[Jane Woolf]

this is really good !!!!!

[Kurai.Merodi]

Cheese Bethy-Wethy!

[Jane Woolf]

No problem fungi! Jk, love ya really ;)
You need to help me write like this!!

[Kurai.Merodi]

... -glare- -.- ... And I shall young one!!

[Jane Woolf]

Yaaaay!!! We can help each other, just not both for poetry cos mine sucks.......

[Kurai.Merodi]

hahaha, sure it doesn't xx

[Jane Woolf]

Oh but I'm most definite it does! xxx

[Kurai.Merodi]

.... I won't knock it till I try it :P

[Jane Woolf]

you'll regret saying you'll help me :p ;)

[Kurai.Merodi]

:P i won't ... maybe XD

[Jane Woolf]

we'll see, we'll see :p XD xxx

[steven]

I feel the rush in this one, i love it!

[Kurai.Merodi]

Thanks, I wanted it to sound a bit rushed. Glad you got it ^.^

[steven]

yep, it made me stay at the edge of my seat the whole time, i enjoyed

[Kurai.Merodi]

Thanks :3 glad you liked it

[Lyric]

I really like your poem, and i can relate to your quote

[Kurai.Merodi]

Thanks :3 glad you liked it >.