Do you remember...?

Do you remember...?

A Poem by Kurai.Merodi
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First love and the ending

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Do you remember my face that day?
Do you remember my  texts?
Do you remember the reason why? 
Do you even remember?
I do.
I remember every thing that day.
Start to finish.
I remember the way you walked up to me, 
the same laziness but there was something in your eyes.
I remember how you spoke,
soft but no sound of love.
I remember how I lied,
saying I was fine,
trying to keep it in.
I remember how you walked away,
not turning back.
And how my tears burnt.
Did you know I still read our texts.
Still think about our first date?
Laughing Playing...
Did you know I still get butterflies when I think about our first kiss?
Did you know I still cry sometimes?
I suppose you're fine though.
I suppose you don't remember.
I suppose it wasn't really that special to you.
Other wise...
you would of looked back.

© 2015 Kurai.Merodi


Author's Note

Kurai.Merodi
This is about my first love and how it ended

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That's a question that is constantly asked in my mind. It's great to remember those moments. While the reality is there, I like to believe that somewhere down in their heart, some fragments of you exist. They wouldn't have bothered in the first place.

Posted 9 Years Ago


There's always that question, "Do you remember..."

Last line is a killer; ties it together with a relatable, heart crushing reality.

Great piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 19, 2015
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Tags: Love, Broken

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Kurai.Merodi
Kurai.Merodi

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Love is simpy frabricated. But that doesn't stop us from belieaving in it. 私は地獄でお会いしましょう I would rather go.. more..

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