Everyday

Today, ye, today

I have found 

My way 

Yesterday, ye, yesterday 

I was found 

And molded like clay

 

Tomorrow, ye, tomorrow 

I will find 

The eternal lights ray 

Everyday, ye, any day

I will say

Pure love lights my way

Author's Note

Good? Mistakes or suggestions?

Reviews

[Heromen Selena]

I like the pattern of the first sentence of the phrases and also the setting of this poem. This is a good poem too :) I mistake I found was the line "the eternal lights ray" I think you meant lights to be possessive, so it would be "the eternal light's ray." But other than that its a great poem. I love the last line because its the most powerful spot in the poem. Good job :)

[KWP]

Nice, short, clear, easy & relatable x

[Black Star Adept]

Hit the magical 5! Thank you :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Sweet without overreaching for a cheap kind of sugar.

[Black Star Adept]

Wow, I really like the review comment! Glad you liked it :)