Chapter 3 Part 1 -Bonding-

Flashing back into time, we see Dr. Hubert having a similar case.

Chapter 3 Part 1

-Bonding-

 

          "Today we have a great opportunity.", gladly yells a tall blond blue eyed man in a tuxedo, waving at the invited guests. He pleasantly walks around a platform centered in the massive amount of people sitting in the ballroom. "With our current governmental reformation we are allowed to experiment on different methods to help our society with the new city and country placements." He smiles wide and bows down to the audience and then walks closer to the red curtains that are covering the platform. "It is time, to reveal what your minds, your bond and your will has created". Again he waves at the crowd smiling form ear to ear, putting on an act to excite the newcomers to the society. "This year, we have had the best year so far! Behind me we have our new product that will help your cause!". Apparently his approach to excite the many is working well, and shows his gratitude by bowing down multiple times as they clap fervently joined by joyful yells. 

 

          Yawning, the young Dr. Hubert rubs his eyes. 'This speech is useless, lets get to the main event', he thinks to himself as he anxiously shifts from one side of the chair to the other. In the great dining room filled with important individuals, impressive buisnessmen and high ranking military members, he feels that his time is being excessivly wasted. 'These people,' he glares at the rich and famous around him 'the financiers need to understand that they do not need to know everything' he mutters to himself rocking back and forth in his sturdy chair. The main event, the introduction to a new race or product, has filled his mind with excitement ever since he was allowed to see the prior version of the past products the facility spat out. He does not want to hear more from this lousy unknown individual standing in the center of the ballroom. "Come on! Get to it! Reveal it!", suddenly shouts a military official in his extremly fancy white uniform. 'Yes, hurry up!', Dr. Hubert thinks quietly to himself as his slightly raises from his chair not being able to hold on much longer.

 

         Ignoring the cries of the few, the witty well dressed announcer continues, "Indeed, a new understanding of how to rule and yet give freedom, has influenced this new community. Our new country, for which we have fought so hard for, Baphom, is the new reign of this great essence! So I proudly introduce to you, our weapon against dualism, Glory!"

 

         Claps echo loudly as the red flashy curtains lift from the ground revealing a small shadow. Bright crystal lights attached to the ceiling of the ballroom suddenly light up the round small platform the shadow is sitting on, revealing it. Loud emotional sounds erupt from all attendances, sounds of laughter and joy join the eruption of excitement.

         Unable to sit still, Dr. Hubert leans forward in his chair, trying to see the magnificient creature, causing him to fall. 'This is our hope!', he yells in his thoughts as he looks up from the floor, 'the balance between two worlds will be complete'. 

          Soon after the revealing of the new creature, the crowd quickly circles the being with astonishment. Trying to get up, and trying to prevent more people from stepping on his brown leather jacket, Dr. Hubert jumps up and latches himself unto someone by the shoulders. 'For the sake of humanity', he screams in his mind, 'we will defeat this bi-universal law of life and death!' Still having not seen the creature, he eagerly pulls himself on top of the person he is holding on to. The force he uses extends the pull, throwing the person to the floor. A screech from the individual he threw adds to the sounds of chaos. Standing back up, not caring wether he hurt them or not, he pushes himself into the crowd.

          Breaking through the dark lighting inside the mass of people, Dr. Hubert reaches the center of the cirlce. The bright beam focused on the being blinds him for a second as he approches the inner platform. His eyes and mouth widen. Still hearing the cheering, the loud cries of freedom and the end to the old world, he sees the shadow, the new weapon for humanity.

 

          "Isn't she adorable?", screams the excited announcer, standing near her platform. Being the only one even so close to the little blond girl sitting on a chair. He dances around her and calls out her attributes.

 "Glory is a wonderful piece of modern sacrifice. Her mind has been split into many small fragments with the ablility to surpass any kind of humanic strengths, abilities and knowledge." The crowd goes wild. People yell the sorts of, beautiful and magnificent words praising their work.

"This really is", the announcer continues having a big smile, "the ultimate source for knowledge!". Roars of excitement ring through the ballroom.

           The little girl, about 8 years of age, just sits on the chair staring straight ahead. Only here and there she would pay slight attention to her little teddy bear with button eyes. She softly pets the little bear on the head or on the belly, never moving other extremities. Still glaring ahead the crowd around her goes wild. 'This is the object?', thinks Dr. Hubert as he peaks at the girl, not paying attention to words spoken by the announcer. 'Is a little girl really the answer to this new system?'. Letting her appearance sink into his mind he stares at her physical body. She has bright baby blue eyes with large eyelashes, which she would close softly at needed times. The makeup on her face seems very natural, yet, she looks more like a doll than really human. And her light blue dress with white ribbons gives the feeling of a princess, that is from a foreign country. 'This girl', he wispers to himself as he inspects her further, 'is able to break through light? Is able to create alternative knowledge? Is the most advanced human known to mankind?'

          "Tonight!", suddenly could Dr. Hubert hear from the announcer standing at the opposite side of the platform, "We will show you, what she can do!". With this the crowd grew silent. 'Oh dear! Here?', Dr. Hubert fell to his rear landing on someones shoes, 'this didn't go to well last year!'. The announcer suddenly laughed out loud, "Ahh did none of you want to see her ability?".

          Nobody moves an inch and dead silence sweeps into the ballroom killing any sound which lays in its way. Laughing strikes the cold room sharp like a knife. The announcer screeches in laughter as he extends his arms trying to hug the audience. "Well?", he questions a man bending down to a knee sweeping a strain of blond hair out of his eye. Not being able to answer, the individual, a master sales man dressed in a black traditional tuxedo just backs away from the freakish looking announcer. "I see, so last years event, is still in memory", said the blond haired devil staring at the man, "So, anyway, we will continue then". Jumping up into the air full of energy again he chuckles to himself. It went dark and only the crystal light from the ceiling stays focused on the little girl on the chair.

"Ladies and Gentlemen! I present to you, GLORY!"

          The little girl stood up, slowly, grabbing her teddy bear and looks into the crowd. 'This is crazy!', said a voice in Dr. Huberts mind, 'they told us we would be safe this time!'. He distances himself more, but, for some odd reason he is unable to move. A deep sensation of terror, over came the doctor. The darkness behind him, grew, and his vision went blurry.

          Before Dr. Hubert could say or even think of anything, he felt a tremendous amount of negative pressure falling unto his shoulders. A soft presence was creeping up on his ear. He could feel the delicate breath of a little child around his sweat ridden head. Ice cold chills went up his spine as he felt death behind him. The pleasant yet black touch of his ear, made him feel blind. All he could focus on was the little girl sitting on the chair. 'Where is this coming from?', still staring at the little girl, as she also did not let her eyes off of him. The feeling of death, clings in the air as he tries to scoot back, not caring about others shoes being in the way. "Hehehehe", his ears were able to hear a muffled girl laughing. "Daddy! You are all red!" His vision grew with pain, not knowing why. Still staring at the little girl, Glory, he suddenly realized that she was standing right in front of him, still staring the same way she was when sitting on the chair. Her eyes did not blink, and her presence grasps his air as he tries to scoot further away from her. "Daddy! You are all red!", he hears her say again, though her mouth is not moving. 'W-What do you want!' he yells in his mind. All of a sudden red blood gushes from her eyes filling the bright blue iris purple and the rest of her eye red. As if being held stuck from a force behind him, the warmth of a voice in his ear, ready to bite into his head chains him to the floor. She abruptly falls to her hands, not losing her stare on him and starts to crawl in a silent matter. Each step she takes, he can feel the fear tug on his soul tighter and tighter. The voice by his ear again whispers coldly, "Daddy! You are all red!". Sudden pain overcomes his mind. The pressure of intense darkness forces red to spurt into his vision. "Daddy! You are all red!"

          The red starts to fade and the intense feeling of being held captive in a forsaken cell erodes. He opens his eyes slowly, seeing the red vision in his eyes change into light. Feeling a pressure on his stomach and receiving his natural feelings again, he looks up, seeing his hands drenched in blood. 'W-Where am I?', was the first thing that came to his now recovering mind. Tilting his head, he sees the almost shattered glass with smears of red blood. Looking around, he realizes finally that he is in the small sound proof room, next to the captive room for Annabelle. Lightning strikes his brain as he realizes reality again. The shadows of fear returned into his soul as his muscles tighten. 'A-Annabelle!' He slightly lifts his head to see where the little girl is. 

          To his surprise, as he turns to his right, he sees two bright baby blue eyes staring at him. "Daddy!", she says in a soft and beautiful voice, "You are all red!".

Author's Note

Tell me about grammar problems, what could be improved and how you felt when reading this chapter! Love to hear how I could improve this!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Your beginning is murky. Entirely to much filler which means to many unnecessary words. Get to the point, build on it, keep the reader locked into the story. I like the idea but your boring me with triviality. Go get them Man!