Lane Meet Lane

Greg pulled me to the tracks, and we all stood there, looking at each other like we knew we were going to win. I could faintly see the light on the train, and I could hear teenager's music blasting and them laughing.
I think I was the only one that was scared. I swallowed hard and made myself stay put. I looked from Tony to Greg then to Collin. I was breathing heavy, getting adrenaline running through me faster. I heard the train horn blasting, and I started to feel scared again. I could see the light and feel the tracks vibrating, the train getting close. Greg got ready to run, and I felt like leaping out of the way already. The train was close, and I could see it coming. Greg jumped, then Tony, and Collin jumped last. I tried to move, but I was caught on something.
"Jump! Lane! Jump now! Get out of the way!" They called, and I pulled my leg harder and harder, feeling hysteria rising up. The train light was blinding, and I closed my eyes, knowing it was the end. I felt something smack hard on my left.

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